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Chapter 5
14 reviewsHarry goes to Grimmauld place, gains another elf, does some cleaning, some creating, and Hermione comes over to play. He visits Gringotts and gets into a fight. Rated for the Gladiator stuff.
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JEDI POTTER
(#) potterfanchuck 2010-06-14
Alorkin & all who read reviews:
Great story!
This is the first cross world that I’ve read however being both a Harry Potter and Star Wars fan I decided to give it a look. I also rarely read uncompleted stories as many are simply abandoned. Obviously since I'm reviewing Chapter 5 I’ve decided it is well worth reading in fact in my humble opinion it borders on greatness.
Please keep up the good work and don’t let us readers down by abandoning the story like so many fanfic writers seem to do. If you decide to move the story to another site please let us know where to find it.
Author's response
To Potterfanchuck & all who write reviews:
Thank you. There are several very good HP/SW crosses, that are well worth reading. 'The Chronicles of the Chosen One', by Padawan Lynn, and 'Harry Potter: Sword and Magic' By: Bluminous, are two such. I suggest you give them both a read.
Being a SW fan as well, i thought there was a great similarity between magic and the force. (In fact my other HP/SW crossover, 'A Boy Named Harry' is based upon that theory) That being so, there is no reason that one cannot be the other. Here, it's a method of ending a way, in that story it will be a lifestyle for Harry.
To call my work 'greatness' is flattering to the extreme. I offer my heartfelt thanks.
I have nearly the entire story either written or nearly so, and so, I have no intention of abandoning this story. R L may give me some trouble but that should only result in a delay.
I have been seriously considering moving some of my stories to both FF.n and Portkey, but that is for the future.
Thank yo once again.
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) Staryfury0901 2018-01-26
Well of course Hollyweed drags sword and gun fights out so long! It loos great but all that armor weighs a lot and I seriously doubt ANY knight ever fought for hours on end without dropping from exhaustion! Now a gun fight I can see lasting much longer if you've got cover. I've loved the fiction that a car door will protect you from assault rife fire. A handgun, maybe. Depending on the caliber. Also probably depending on if it's from the forties or fifties. Now then, this is like the third or maybe fourth time I've started this story. But somehow I never get to finish it. Hopefully, this time around I will. I've never read the HP books but from what I've heard, there's no way in hell Albus Dumbledore is a light wizard! He's a Dark Lord masquerading as one. Those in my family that have read them tell me I'm wrong. But his actions speak louder then anything he could say.JEDI POTTER
(#) Staryfury0901 2018-10-14
Ya, I'm STILL trying to finish this!!! Anyways, I noticed two errors in this chapter. 1) fo0r? And the other is the same mistake JKR made. Find a dictionary and look up VANQUISH. It don't say a thing about killing!JEDI POTTER
(#) Staryfury0901 2020-06-13
Surprise, surprise! I did finally manage to finish this and totally enjoyed it as well. Now I'm rereading it for the enjoyment I got from it. But going back over my first post I'm dismayed at all the letters I left out of my spelling! My spelling may not be the greatest but that bad I didn't know I was! Anyways, as I said in my first review, there's no way Knights in heavy plate armor fought for hours with dropping from exhaustion. Not to mention those little pig stickers of theirs weren't exactly light weight either!
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