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• YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

  (#) pi3142 2010-04-27

  I think this is not up to your usual strength as it seems to glide over a lot of things. Is this because you want to make a set up and the real story begins later?

• YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

  (#) OdinMage 2010-04-27

  Umm... it's Knight Bus, not Knight's Bus.
  
  Other than that, I want to see more.

• YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

  (#) Wolfric 2010-04-27

  I am enjoying the story. There seems to be a bit of a lull in the progress of most of the stories I have been following so your updates are especially welcome. Thanks for writing. W.

• YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

  (#) Theo 2010-04-27

  You wasted a perfectly good sterility curse there. Shame on you.
  
  If nothing else happened to Draco, and he is betrothed, it would be funny when he is tested for fertility and is discovered to be infertile.

• YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

  (#) jabarber69 2010-04-28

  Excellent as usual... Well worth the wait... I really love the way you write...especially the way this chapter was written. also like him being gray, which is a more modern or I should say realistic look on things.... also I really like this harry and hermione but hey dont forget luna too, those three just seem to mesh together you know!!!

• YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

  (#) BJH 2010-04-29

  Nice tight chapter with no extranious prose. I was sad to see that Malfoy had died before he had a chance to enjoy the hex that Harry put on him previously. Maybe we will get a chance to see it with the son... please?
  
  BJH

• YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

  (#) Cateagle 2010-04-29

  A minor question - did the Death Eaters take one of their own back with them? Or was one of them of "special interest" to the DMLE? Harry got three, and then another four, but the Daily Prophet only reported on six of them. If the DMLE is keeping the seventh one under wraps, that opens the door to all sorts of possibilities.

  Author's response

  poop -- error on my part. I'll have to cut the number or add a name

• YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

  (#) WBH21C 2010-04-30

  Great start!

• YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

  (#) itsme 2010-05-01

  Excellent as usual. I am liking this story very much. Keep up the good work!

• YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

  (#) stargatesg1fan1 2010-05-14

  Don't listen to anybody about the narrative nature of your fic. They may say they can write but until they prove it they can kiss your ass. I like this fic a lot so far. The H/Hr is great...I hope they end up permanently together. I like Harry's somewhat subtle power. I look forward to the intensifying of the H/Hr relationship. Thanks for writing.

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