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Different View
10 reviewsClaire is starting to fit in with the others but she worries about how Anna will react.
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Forever and Ever
(#) AshleyBaby 2010-05-25
....hmmm
this story needs to progress faster.
Hurry and finish!Author's response
Oh good Lord. Stop reading now if you are want a quick finish. I have spent so much time and effort making this story a very involved work that I can be proud of. Sorry if that's not what you are looking for.Forever and Ever
(#) FamousLastWords09 2010-05-26
Haha your response to the first review is funny 'Oh good Lord. Stop reading now if you are want a quick finish' lol I think I'm in a giggly mood.
Haha wouldn't it be funny if Anna had diabetes which is why she needs the shots (ok it wouldn't be medically funny) but it would be story funny cause it wouldn't really fit.
As always I thoroughly enjoyed that and I'm looking forward to the next installment.
xoAuthor's response
Okay stop laughing at me! I really didn't mean to sound evil on that response. I guess when I looked at it I just went "oh holy crap" there is so much to this story to be revealed that I just felt bad if someone thought there would be a quick ending. Hell look at what I've written. My first story was a epic that went on for almost 2 1/2 years LOL Not that this one will but the story really does get very involved. I do want to thank everyone for the reviews though. And by the way Missy when are you gonna update????Forever and Ever
(#) x_Charlie_x 2010-05-26
Ah wow, I really don't know what to say except that I love this fic!
I like that we're getting to see more of Claire and that she's getting her own little subplot thing going on.
Oo, I have a feeling we wont find out what those shots are for for a long time lol but I'm guessing it's something to keep her in control/ keep her alive?
I dunno...
If it hadnt just finished I would recommend you going to write for Lost lol, you're stories are pretty epic! Although you do tend to answer all the questions you raise =/ lol
Ok, this was meant to be quick =/ I can't wait for more!! xxAuthor's response
Thanks for the review. You know I never watched "Lost" but I heard it was good. I do like to have lots of twist and turns!Forever and Ever
(#) shortygirl 2010-05-26
What the matter with Anna? Claire and Bob are cute.
update soonForever and Ever
(#) Tomgirl567 2010-05-26
I love Claire and Bob together they seem so cute :D
I wonder what is up with Anna also what will happen when Gee does find out about this thing Anna is hiding. And just saying I do love how long your storys are it makes the story last longer and more exciting.
Update soon.
Tommy :DForever and Ever
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2010-05-26
great chapter!
right, she's dead. so this injection keeps her alive? or is it something she needs to have because she is dead, as in a Vampire??
Claire and her are different. ooh there is so much going on here behind the scenes isn't there?!
i don't want to guess actually. but i am loving it! and i want a long, well thought out story! blimey that is what i expect from you! haha!
i'm trusting Anna more in this chapter.
thank you Missus, and roll on Sunday!Forever and Ever
(#) icyblue858 2010-05-26
As always I LOVE your stories! I like that you don't answer questions right away, it's what keep people reading! Can't wait for the next update!Forever and Ever
(#) doyleangel 2010-05-27
What? Death? So is she somehow dead? or dying maybe...wow I just don't know. I'm so wanting to know the truth lol. The suspense is killing me lol.
And Claire, I love how she is coming out of her shell a little bit.
I can't wait for more!!!!Forever and Ever
(#) lunchboxhero 2010-05-27
Hey Ashley. totally agree. Some of the chapters feel slow. You've every right to say that. It is a good story tho, interesting to see where it's going to go. I'm very interested in this Jacob character.
I have my theories but I always feel like an idiot if they're wrong so I'll keep em to myself for now.
XxxX
great stuff!
JessForever and Ever
(#) aldualma 2010-09-18
OMG IS SHE FUCKIN DEAD OR WHAT? Dear God, you are so good at this, girl! and about those who say your chapters are slow, they don't get a hint, lol. some chapters need to be that way; you need to enjoy reading it, now only discovering what happens at the end. the story itself is way more important than the ending, i think. mmmmm the ghost of you @ aol sessions, when Gerard goes OH, OH , OH. That's good.
hahahah i loved the part when G texts like "bob says hello to claire. LOL" i seriously laughed aloud. i swear. i dunno, i guess the LOL was like out of place since everything seems so "formal" between them. you know what i mean, not formal, but like.. poetic? they're both pretty poetic :P
LOVING THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SORRY I RAMBLE SO MUCH.
Hey I'd like to see some response :P
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