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• The Mistake:Revised

  (#) mwinter 2010-06-02

  Much better then the first try.

• The Mistake:Revised

  (#) Nautilus 2010-06-03

  i'm confused by the last little snip-it?
  who's wedding?

• The Mistake:Revised

  (#) Jden 2010-06-03

  Okay, I've read the old and the re-posted version and I still don't know for sure exactly who is married to who and why, whoever they are, they're having "terminal" marriage problems. The first version made some attempt to explain "why" Harry was running away, yes running away since the explanation was extremely vague. The entire plot line is unsatisfactory.

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