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  (#) MyNameOkay 2010-11-15

  I Like Your Mini-Story Lines, But I Think You Need To Get A Story Line And Stick With It.. I Think You Could Possibly Make Something Great.
  Oh, And There Were A Few Punctuation Errors, but Thats Okay;P
  
  MNO

  Author's response

  You mean like chapters? I've tried that but haven't had much luck. Maybe I could try again. Thanks :)

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