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The Untitled Story - Year 7 and Beyond
(#) michae1ange1o 2010-07-26
Nifty, thanks for the update. Buggered if I can understand why a city ship full of ancients would stick around in a galaxy full of wraith though.The Untitled Story - Year 7 and Beyond
(#) belthazor2 2010-07-26
Iteresting story so far. Hope to read more.The Untitled Story - Year 7 and Beyond
(#) De_Siathuan 2010-08-16
This is bloody brilliant. A few plot holes, such as why Harry doesn't recruit more from the adult population or instal muggle military to operate everything they can.
Also, there's not much regarding how they use the Ancient's technology - though I would dare presume that Harry didn't design the Phoenix, so much as locate its specs in the database. It requires a LOT of technical know-how to design something as simple as a modern car, I wouldn't even dream of designing a spaceship. But otherwise, what's the power source; some kind of reactors, zero point modules, what? Because, since they can produce them... Well, that solved Britain's energy issues for the foreseeable future. Ancient technology used for medicine, agriculture, military... There are so many things that could be done, with little effort - all it takes is time...
Won't you post on FFN so that I can track it? Pretty please with sugar on top?
Or perhaps you could send me a mail every time you update, though I wouldn't want to impose...The Untitled Story - Year 7 and Beyond
(#) rainbow2007 2010-09-06
I love your story. I cann't wait to see want happen when Harry has enough.
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