This was great. Completely in-character for both Faye and Spike. I liked this little glance into Faye's head. You really captured the character perfectly.
(#) Moira 2005-06-23
Wow. Smooth, almost delicate handling of irony there. Oh what am I saying? I LIKE this story about Faye's and Spike's relationship. I could clearly see that if Faye should have any secret thoughts about Spike, this story sums them up. Keep writing!
She presses him up against the nearest wall,
Very nice. I love that this is is all Faye, that she's the one making all of this happen -- that the truth is, really, she's hooked. Whatever she wants to call it. Good stuff.
Loved this. Hope to see more of your stuff soon.
Hm... I think you could have done better. That's not saying it wasn't a good fic, but I don't think this is the greatest the fic could be.
For all it's imperfections, I love it
^ ^ Keep up the good work!
~The Captain has spoken
I love how IN character Faye is... i must say this could be better though, you could have done something more with them... haha but i love how shes pretty much in control nicely characterized.
This is a really good fanfic. I suppose you could call it a pairing fic, but it's so unorthodox in that regard that it really doesn't feel like it. It's well written, unlike most of the garbage on the internet, and really feels in character. I particularly like how you handled the sex, it was tasteful and didn't take a massive dump all over Spike's past like most Spike/Faye fanfiction does. Thumbs up all the way.
This was the best BEbop story I have ever read, I loved how in character they were, and if I had to imagen what the relationship would be between them this would be it.
I've always had a hard time believeing Faye/Spike as a pairing. But I really liked this fic. It's impersonal and beliveable and how I see them interacting. It seems cannon to me.
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