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The Court of the Queen
33 reviewsWhile on the run from the Death Eaters, Harry and Hermione are waylaid by an interested third party.
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The Court of the Queen
(#) grenouille 2010-08-10
Hell, yeah, I hope to see more. This promises to be a wonderful change to JRK's idiocy. Well done.Author's response
I'm glad you think so, and hope you continue to think so after I keep this story going.The Court of the Queen
(#) Zucht 2010-08-10
A jealous Hermione... I like it! I'm also looking forward to seeing who the Queen is... I'd guess either Fluer or her mother - in a recent corination.Author's response
I can tell you right now that at least one of your guesses is wrong... but stay tuned.The Court of the Queen
(#) Vanir 2010-08-10
Interesting outset. Few things are new in the fanfic heavens, but this is a setup i haven't seen before. There's not much to flame or applaud yet, but you have my interest firmly in hand. Let's see where you'll take us.
VanirAuthor's response
Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy the ride.The Court of the Queen
(#) thekev 2010-08-10
Okay you have my attention, let's see if you keep it.This was a very good start to what looks like could be a great fic, but I'll hold my tongue until I see that it is going to keep going and not get good and stop like so many others are doing nowadays.The Court of the Queen
(#) juggler196 2010-08-10
You've definitely written a good first chapter. It did what the first chapter/part of a story is supposed to do: it drew me in and made me want to read more. Please update soon.Author's response
It was originally going to be a longer section, but this seemed like a good place to leave it off. I'll update as soon as I can.The Court of the Queen
(#) dmacx 2010-08-11
I certainly wouldn't be upset if this continued.
Author's response
You seem to be in the majority. I will continue the story as soon as possible.The Court of the Queen
(#) Cateagle 2010-08-11
Good attention-grabbing start that leaves me looking forward to more. Along the way I can see the Veela assisting Harry and Hermione in seeing what truly lies between them and then in acting on that knowledge (mind you, I could see it being done strictly as advice or as "facilitating" it in a three-, or more-, some. Of course, with this assistance being offered and accepted, the deserter well might not return to them at all; not that he'd really be missed under these circumstances.The Court of the Queen
(#) ZZ9PluralZAlpha 2010-08-13
Hi,
I'd love to read more. This is a really interesting beginning, and I'm eager to hear more. Please update again!The Court of the Queen
(#) lycus 2010-08-14
Man do you know how to grab someones attention. Please continue to write your stories, We have been waiting for a while for you to continue with them especally Team of Rivals. It is good to see that one of the better authors is writing again.Author's response
It's just a matter of writing the kind of story that you'd like to read yourself.
I've got half a chapter of Team of Rivals in another window now. I just have to write the other half...
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