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• The Court of the Queen

  (#) NuitTombee 2010-10-13

  I won't waste your time on repeating the obvious. I'll just give you my encouragement to keep up the good work and wish you the best of luck in writing.

• The Court of the Queen

  (#) Zucht 2011-01-18

  What a start! Is the Queen's name Delacore by any chance (I hope it is). I really would like for you to continue this story. I always thought the time Harry and Hermione spent in the tent without getting together in any form was unrealistic, not to mention welcomeing Ron Pettigrew... er Weasley back with open arms was AU to the canon of the books.

• The Court of the Queen

  (#) drifter 2011-02-23

  I agree with every one else, this opening is seems very promising.
  
  Also, good to see back.
  
  I have only scanned your first page of reviews, and while one suggested Fleur or her mother, but no-one has mentioned Gabrielle. I think she has probably gone through the development everyone goes on about. And someone that had rescued you from a environment that is totally against your fire nature has to have left a good impression.
  
  Um, with their nature so close to ... nature, will her court be anything like Selie (Mercedes Lackey) or high elves (W Shakespeare Oberon)?? Oh heck, lets not forget the “Lord of the Rings” elves. Hey, there is a resemblance.
  
  
  If this is a Queen's Court, will there be ambassadors from other magical courts?
  
  Definitely like to see what else you might come up with.
  
  May the MUSE always be with you!!!
  ~.^
  

• The Court of the Queen

  (#) chanewt906 2011-05-10

  Excellent start; would like to see some where Harry and Hermione get closer sooner after Ron deserts them, but this is an excellent way to pull readers in and make them kick and scream for more.
  Get the feeling, though, that the translation spell didn't HAVE to be done via a kiss, but it makes sense that a Veela would see the opportunity and grab it for all it's worth.

• The Court of the Queen

  (#) TurtleBlue 2011-08-01

  Interesting premise.
  
  A rarity: a Hermione who believes she is attractive.
  
  Shame Harry's courage wasn't enough to cop a feel of that delectable Granger arse!
  
  More sir, when you find time...
  

• The Court of the Queen

  (#) apAidan 2012-01-04

  First of all, it's an interesting beginning. I'm not familiar with that particular prompt, but it does have a particular flair with it. I'm curious to see if you're going to go on with this one.
  
  it's a good glimpse of the interactions between Harry and Hermione while they're on their own.
  
  looking forward to seeing if this goes anywhere.
  
  apAidan

• The Court of the Queen

  (#) pawn6250 2012-03-21

  Good start ,
  Seems to travel well so keep going .

• The Court of the Queen

  (#) GBTtown 2013-07-13

  Since 2010 you have three pages of reviews all praising your unique plot and suggesting that you continue. At least two of which are from talented and well recognized fanfic authors.
  I agree, I look forward to your next update.

  Author's response

  I'm glad to have received such good reviews, but my partially completed next chapters lie at the corner of my writing style, busy schedule, and wandering Muses.
  
  I'll update whenever I can.

• The Court of the Queen

  (#) Trebores1 2013-10-12

  
  Please continue this and your other stories.

• The Court of the Queen

  (#) wisper316 2014-03-13

  Good please continue it would be a waste of such a promising storyline
  

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