- Oooh! What a yummy concept! All three of my favorite silver haired biseinen getting it on (maybe menage a trois style?)! I mean Sephiroth, Loz and Yazoo, cause I don't know how you'd fit an underaged kid like Kadaj into the menage, except as a typical teenaged peeping tom...and I do still remember being a teen, and being slightly perverted that way.
(#) ReaperRain 2007-07-28Very, VERY good. It's cute how naive the three of them are - but also saddening, in it's own way. I personally thought Sephiroth moved a little too fast with Loz rather than denying himself the act or at least considering the morals, but even so, it was good. I'd like to see more Loz/Yazoo in the future, since that's my fav pairing.
- Wow, this was a great read! I never read fics about Kadaj, Yazoo, and Loz, but because of this I warmed up immensely to them, especially Loz.
I like how you wrote Zack and Sephiroth's characters, and how you conveyed their personality through their thoughts and actions when dealing with the the three of them.
I really like your writing style, and you were able to convey a lot of emotion in even scenes that did not bluntly try to do so.
Keep it up!
- This is THE most moving Sephiroth/Remnant story I have ever read. Ever. I love all of what happened. I've always felt bad for those four silver haired boys and I love what you had happen to them. Great job! Sephiroth and Loz now have a mate who understands them as does Kadaj and Yazoo.
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