(#) Ariel_Tempest 2006-05-02Excellent. Cid x Tifa isn't a pairing I'd thought of before, but you pull it off nicely. The imagery is nice and clear, good dialogue, excellent use of bird/racing terminology.
...and, you know, you tossed his Pissyness and Teioh in there, which means I automatically love you.
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