Categories > Comics > Green Lantern > Ring
- This is almost too true to be enjoyable.
The ending could stand to be a little stronger. It cuts off, as if there's more. I don't think that you should tell us what the narrator's conflict with the other person was, but maybe a bit more of a resolve over how he/she felt about it.
Author's responseInteresting thoughts. I'll try to revisit this sometime and see if I could strengthen the ending.
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