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Ok third chappie here. And yea…Enjoy!
If writing looks like this then it's a flash back!
"Why me? Why me out of every girl in this school?" Hinata sobbed silently as she sat in the girl's bathroom waiting for lunch to end. She stood up and let out a shaky sigh as rubbed her teary eyes. 'Get a hold of yourself Hinata, you can do this.' She jumped as the school bell rang indicating it was time for seventh period. Taking a deep breath, she walked out of the bathroom and towards her next class, Biology with Jiraya Sensei.
"Hey Hinata! Wait up!" Hinata slowed down for her friend, Sakura Haruno. "Hello Sakura, how are you?" Sakura gave her a strange look, "I should be asking you the same thing. Kiba told me what happened at lunch, what happened?" Hinata shook her head, "nothing, I'm just not feeling well lately." Sakura nodded, "I guess you wouldn't with all the rain falling unexpectantley, it's dangerous at night with this kind of weather." "You don't know the half of it," Hinata muttered. "What?" "Hinata shook her head, "nothing, I'm just thinking." "Oh well, I'll see you after class, ok?" Sakura waved good bye as the passed Hinata's last class of the day, Math with Kakashi Sensei.
Hinata waved and entered her class, and as she looked for a seat noticed that practically the whole class hadn't arrived yet. The only ones in the class room were Shikamaru, Tenten, Kabuto, and Kakashi Sensei. She walked to her seat, politely saying hello to each of her classmates and Sensei. Sitting next to Shikamaru she realized that she forgot her math book with Kiba. "S-Shikamaru, is it ok if you share your book with me?" He looked at her with a bored expression, "sure whatever, I'll probably be asleep for the entire period anyways." She thanked him as he passed her his book.
"Ok class since it seems everyone is here, let's begin." Hinata froze. [He pushed her against the wall, and pressing his lips roughly against hers began to unbutton her shirt. "Let's begin." ]She shook her head as she began to remember that night again. "Is something wrong Ms. Hyuuga?" Kakashi asked giving her an exasperating look, are you lost?" "You lost?"
"N-no Sensei, it's just a headache." Hinata blushed. "Ok, but try to pay more attention next time. She nodded vigorously, and turned her attention back to the book. 'God make this day end please.'
"Hinata, are you up for the mall today?" Sakura asked catching up to her mouse like friend. "I don't think so I have homework." "Homework? On a Friday?" Hinata blushed, "yea well I have a project due for Iruka Sensei's class on Monday." Sakura crossed her arms, "that's literary class, your best subject; you can have that done in five minutes. We're going to the mall now." "B-but!" "No buts, NOW!" Sakura commanded as she pulled her poor friend towards her pink convertible.
Hinata sighed defeated in the passenger seat as Sakura began to drive towards the Haiti Mall. "Hinata, you know what?" Hinata looked at her friend curiously, "what?" "You seem a little, how should I put this nicely, restless?" "Restless? Well I don't get much sleep nowadays." Sakura nodded, "hey that reminds me, did you ever read that book I told you about?" "Now what's a nice girl like you have such a naughty book like this?" "N-no, I forgot."
Sakura laughed, "forgot, or we're you too embarrassed?" Hinata gave her a weak smile, "a little bit of both." "Well read it when you get a chance, it is a really good story. It's about some girl who wanders into some alley and meets the man of her dreams. It's full of romance and suspension." Hinata tried her best to stay calm, "maybe we should go home, I'm a little tired." "Home? Hinata you really need to get out more and have some fun." "How about a little fun?" "We're here!" Sakura smiled, drove into an empty parking space. "Yay," Hinata said weakly.
Three hours later, much to Hinata's dismay, they finished going through the whole mall. They had gone through every store at least twice, with Sakura trying on everything that she could get her hands on, while Hinata lifelessly followed behind carrying Sakura's purchases. "Wasn't that just relaxing? Too bad we have to leave so soon…" Hinata mentally cheered in her head. "Hey who are those guys next to my car?" HInata looked to Sakura's car and saw four guys surrounding it drinking what seemed to be alcohol. "Maybe w-we shouldn't go over there." Hinata shivered at the sight of the men all dressed in black. "Like hell I'm going to let those assholes stand around my car," Sakura stomped towards the men, "hey what the hell do you guys think your doing!"
Hinata followed at a safe distance behind her friend and watched as the men all turned their attention to them. "Tobi check it out, two little lambs strayed from their herd." A man with a weird mask laughed, "Well just our luck, we were looking for some fun, and it looks like we won't have to go far after all, right Hidan and Kisame?" Two of the men, one a strange blue color and the other with white hair nodded. The three of them turned towards a man with a girlish figure and a ponytail, "what do you think we should do with them." The man called Itachi turned his cold eyes towards them, "have some fun of course."
"How about a little fun?" Hinata shivered. "Sakura, please let's just go." One of the men, Kisame, grabbed Hinata's wrist, "whoa where's the fire hot stuff." "Why the rush?" Hinata felt she stiffens and began to get lightheaded. "Why are you afraid?" As Hinata lost consciousness and heard Sakura scream.
"Hinata? Hinata can you hear me?" Hinata felt someone shaking her lightly, "Kiba?" She opened her eyes and realized that she was still in the parking lot, and both Sakura and Kiba were staring down at her. "What happened to those guys?" Hinata asked, looking for the scary men. "Kiba came to the rescue!" Sakura gushed holding onto Kiba's arm. Hinata faced Kiba, "how did you get rid of them?" He puffed his chest, "they weren't so tough!" "Wait, how did you know we were in trouble?" Sakura pulled away from him, "that's right, how did you know?" "Well I was looking for Hinata after school to return her book, when I saw you both get in Sakura's car. So I followed you but as soon as you got in the mall, I lost you so I went to wait in my car when I saw those men."
"T-thank you Kiba," Hinata sighed. "That's what friends are for, and do you know what else friends are for?" Hinata gave him a confused look, "what?" "Friends find out what's wrong with other friends," Sakura finished. Hinata gave them an innocent look, "what do you mean what's wrong?" "Hinata were just worried, we care about you a lot." "Because I love you."
She put her hands on her ears, "please can one of you just take me home?" Both her friends shook their heads in disappointment. "I'll take her," Kiba volunteered. "Alright, I'll see you Monday Hinata." They waved goodbye and Hinata followed Kiba to his car. They drove in silence, the way Hinata liked it. Before any of them knew it, they arrived at Hinata's house, and Kiba walked her to the door. "Thanks again Kiba, for everything." Kiba nodded, "it was nothing really, but Hinata you know you can tell me anything right?" "Of course Kiba, you're my best friend." "Then why won't you tell me what's going on? Something happened, but you won't give any details." "It was nothing, I've told you before." "Fine, I'll see you Monday." "Bye Kiba."
Hinata sighed in relief as she closed her front door; she knew she couldn't tell anyone what happened that day, the embarrassment and shame she would feel. She started to go her bedroom, when a knock at the door sounded. She sighed, 'probably Kiba or Sakura. "Why won't you guys drop it, nothing happened?" As soon she opened the door a large shadow threw itself at her, causing her to fall back. "I wouldn't exactly say what happened between us nothing." Hinata screamed, "Somebody help me!" The man laughed, "Who would help you? There's no one around for miles on a Friday. There all out having fun, just like me and you are about to." Hinata opened to scream again, but he roughly pushed his lips against hers and began to tie her hands. Once tied he pulled back and quickly taped her mouth shut. "Be a good girl and relax this time."
Can anyone tell that I greatly dislike Hinata? No? Oh well…I don't really like how this story is going…Any suggestions to how I can improve it? Oh and should I include a sex scene? I'm not good at writing them, but it would seem fitting to the story…Oh and one more thing, in case you can't tell, and I'm sure you cannot, Hinata is in College! Yay she is legal! …Yay?
If writing looks like this then it's a flash back!
"Why me? Why me out of every girl in this school?" Hinata sobbed silently as she sat in the girl's bathroom waiting for lunch to end. She stood up and let out a shaky sigh as rubbed her teary eyes. 'Get a hold of yourself Hinata, you can do this.' She jumped as the school bell rang indicating it was time for seventh period. Taking a deep breath, she walked out of the bathroom and towards her next class, Biology with Jiraya Sensei.
"Hey Hinata! Wait up!" Hinata slowed down for her friend, Sakura Haruno. "Hello Sakura, how are you?" Sakura gave her a strange look, "I should be asking you the same thing. Kiba told me what happened at lunch, what happened?" Hinata shook her head, "nothing, I'm just not feeling well lately." Sakura nodded, "I guess you wouldn't with all the rain falling unexpectantley, it's dangerous at night with this kind of weather." "You don't know the half of it," Hinata muttered. "What?" "Hinata shook her head, "nothing, I'm just thinking." "Oh well, I'll see you after class, ok?" Sakura waved good bye as the passed Hinata's last class of the day, Math with Kakashi Sensei.
Hinata waved and entered her class, and as she looked for a seat noticed that practically the whole class hadn't arrived yet. The only ones in the class room were Shikamaru, Tenten, Kabuto, and Kakashi Sensei. She walked to her seat, politely saying hello to each of her classmates and Sensei. Sitting next to Shikamaru she realized that she forgot her math book with Kiba. "S-Shikamaru, is it ok if you share your book with me?" He looked at her with a bored expression, "sure whatever, I'll probably be asleep for the entire period anyways." She thanked him as he passed her his book.
"Ok class since it seems everyone is here, let's begin." Hinata froze. [He pushed her against the wall, and pressing his lips roughly against hers began to unbutton her shirt. "Let's begin." ]She shook her head as she began to remember that night again. "Is something wrong Ms. Hyuuga?" Kakashi asked giving her an exasperating look, are you lost?" "You lost?"
"N-no Sensei, it's just a headache." Hinata blushed. "Ok, but try to pay more attention next time. She nodded vigorously, and turned her attention back to the book. 'God make this day end please.'
"Hinata, are you up for the mall today?" Sakura asked catching up to her mouse like friend. "I don't think so I have homework." "Homework? On a Friday?" Hinata blushed, "yea well I have a project due for Iruka Sensei's class on Monday." Sakura crossed her arms, "that's literary class, your best subject; you can have that done in five minutes. We're going to the mall now." "B-but!" "No buts, NOW!" Sakura commanded as she pulled her poor friend towards her pink convertible.
Hinata sighed defeated in the passenger seat as Sakura began to drive towards the Haiti Mall. "Hinata, you know what?" Hinata looked at her friend curiously, "what?" "You seem a little, how should I put this nicely, restless?" "Restless? Well I don't get much sleep nowadays." Sakura nodded, "hey that reminds me, did you ever read that book I told you about?" "Now what's a nice girl like you have such a naughty book like this?" "N-no, I forgot."
Sakura laughed, "forgot, or we're you too embarrassed?" Hinata gave her a weak smile, "a little bit of both." "Well read it when you get a chance, it is a really good story. It's about some girl who wanders into some alley and meets the man of her dreams. It's full of romance and suspension." Hinata tried her best to stay calm, "maybe we should go home, I'm a little tired." "Home? Hinata you really need to get out more and have some fun." "How about a little fun?" "We're here!" Sakura smiled, drove into an empty parking space. "Yay," Hinata said weakly.
Three hours later, much to Hinata's dismay, they finished going through the whole mall. They had gone through every store at least twice, with Sakura trying on everything that she could get her hands on, while Hinata lifelessly followed behind carrying Sakura's purchases. "Wasn't that just relaxing? Too bad we have to leave so soon…" Hinata mentally cheered in her head. "Hey who are those guys next to my car?" HInata looked to Sakura's car and saw four guys surrounding it drinking what seemed to be alcohol. "Maybe w-we shouldn't go over there." Hinata shivered at the sight of the men all dressed in black. "Like hell I'm going to let those assholes stand around my car," Sakura stomped towards the men, "hey what the hell do you guys think your doing!"
Hinata followed at a safe distance behind her friend and watched as the men all turned their attention to them. "Tobi check it out, two little lambs strayed from their herd." A man with a weird mask laughed, "Well just our luck, we were looking for some fun, and it looks like we won't have to go far after all, right Hidan and Kisame?" Two of the men, one a strange blue color and the other with white hair nodded. The three of them turned towards a man with a girlish figure and a ponytail, "what do you think we should do with them." The man called Itachi turned his cold eyes towards them, "have some fun of course."
"How about a little fun?" Hinata shivered. "Sakura, please let's just go." One of the men, Kisame, grabbed Hinata's wrist, "whoa where's the fire hot stuff." "Why the rush?" Hinata felt she stiffens and began to get lightheaded. "Why are you afraid?" As Hinata lost consciousness and heard Sakura scream.
"Hinata? Hinata can you hear me?" Hinata felt someone shaking her lightly, "Kiba?" She opened her eyes and realized that she was still in the parking lot, and both Sakura and Kiba were staring down at her. "What happened to those guys?" Hinata asked, looking for the scary men. "Kiba came to the rescue!" Sakura gushed holding onto Kiba's arm. Hinata faced Kiba, "how did you get rid of them?" He puffed his chest, "they weren't so tough!" "Wait, how did you know we were in trouble?" Sakura pulled away from him, "that's right, how did you know?" "Well I was looking for Hinata after school to return her book, when I saw you both get in Sakura's car. So I followed you but as soon as you got in the mall, I lost you so I went to wait in my car when I saw those men."
"T-thank you Kiba," Hinata sighed. "That's what friends are for, and do you know what else friends are for?" Hinata gave him a confused look, "what?" "Friends find out what's wrong with other friends," Sakura finished. Hinata gave them an innocent look, "what do you mean what's wrong?" "Hinata were just worried, we care about you a lot." "Because I love you."
She put her hands on her ears, "please can one of you just take me home?" Both her friends shook their heads in disappointment. "I'll take her," Kiba volunteered. "Alright, I'll see you Monday Hinata." They waved goodbye and Hinata followed Kiba to his car. They drove in silence, the way Hinata liked it. Before any of them knew it, they arrived at Hinata's house, and Kiba walked her to the door. "Thanks again Kiba, for everything." Kiba nodded, "it was nothing really, but Hinata you know you can tell me anything right?" "Of course Kiba, you're my best friend." "Then why won't you tell me what's going on? Something happened, but you won't give any details." "It was nothing, I've told you before." "Fine, I'll see you Monday." "Bye Kiba."
Hinata sighed in relief as she closed her front door; she knew she couldn't tell anyone what happened that day, the embarrassment and shame she would feel. She started to go her bedroom, when a knock at the door sounded. She sighed, 'probably Kiba or Sakura. "Why won't you guys drop it, nothing happened?" As soon she opened the door a large shadow threw itself at her, causing her to fall back. "I wouldn't exactly say what happened between us nothing." Hinata screamed, "Somebody help me!" The man laughed, "Who would help you? There's no one around for miles on a Friday. There all out having fun, just like me and you are about to." Hinata opened to scream again, but he roughly pushed his lips against hers and began to tie her hands. Once tied he pulled back and quickly taped her mouth shut. "Be a good girl and relax this time."
Can anyone tell that I greatly dislike Hinata? No? Oh well…I don't really like how this story is going…Any suggestions to how I can improve it? Oh and should I include a sex scene? I'm not good at writing them, but it would seem fitting to the story…Oh and one more thing, in case you can't tell, and I'm sure you cannot, Hinata is in College! Yay she is legal! …Yay?
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