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Chapter 44
Harry is captured by Voldemort, but manages to escape with some unexpected help. Now he just has to deal with the consequences.
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Harry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) slickrcbd 2006-11-12
Great story, but you seem to be missing the epilogue. Shouldn't there be one final part that has the conversation with Hermionie, and the sentencing of Pettygrew? Those are pretty much the only loose threads, save a formal wedding.Harry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) wimvincken 2006-11-16
Great story is this. I love it.
I read it already five times, this evening when the wife is from home the 6th time.Harry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) DeathMan 2007-02-03
Fantastic!Some of your chapters repeated in the begining though.Harry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) fool2folly 2007-08-26
great story almost a case of porn with plot rather than blog standard harem fic
Harry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) panicatthetest 2008-10-22
Good story the end felt a bit rushed though.Harry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) Stanger 2009-01-14
great fic, hope to see it continued soon enough,oh, and if you plan to bring hannah abbot as a thrall, please do it for harry's harem, anyways, you decide, it's your story, just a requestHarry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) t_adams11 2009-07-08
cmon you cant just end it there you gotta write some kinda hapily ever afer for them like a wedding and about the kids just droping it off like that almost made it a 4/5 for meHarry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) deusexinfernus 2009-10-04
WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!?!
"Attero obscurum"?!?
More like "Deus Ex Machina/I'm bored writing and want to stop now" Spell!!!
OK, I'm done raving. Just one parting comment. PLEASE don't do anything like that again. I understand the your story so you do whatever you like but reading 43,5 exquisite chapters to come to THAT as an ending is honestly worse than an abandon/hiatus notice.
Just my 2 cents.
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(#) OmegaDVD 2010-05-26
First seriously what is with your fascination with someones back door or butt hole. This whole story seems to be centered around everyone getting a burrito or a butt plug up there back door. Second I am 100 percent sure harry does not use ebonics (lets be about it) I have read a lot of story's and this is the first one I have ever seen with ebonics (lets be about it) in a number of chapters. Third one of the chapters is a certified train wreck one paragraph is repeated twice and thats the end of that chapter. The first sentence in most chapters are repeated twice with the occasional AN in the middle between the repeated lines. There are also big english grammar problems. I am sorry if you think this is a flame in truth its not but you do have a lot of work to do to clean this story up and I might add find another sexual activity for the story other than there back door or butt hole.Harry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) Draconias 2010-10-04
super well written, the ending is rather awesome, albeit rushed.
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