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Wishing for Neverland
2 reviewsSaria is a quiet girl who lacks nothing in her life... yet still is unhappy. What happens when a strange vistior shows up and takes her to a land of magic and wonder?
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Childhood Dreams
(#) armourdude 2006-03-15
This has to be one of the most orginal stories I have read in a long time! The beging I thought was done well with the comments and converstion of the kids. The situation with the parrents very common. The set up and the trouble for it not to uncommon.
The friends I thought were very belivable. Not perfect kids but realistic with thier flaws.
Then I never saw it comming. The Fairy and companions. I wont say much more don't want to ruin it.
I am also rating this too for originality.Childhood Dreams
(#) Rous 2006-04-18
Thought I would check out your writing to see what is what. What I found is that it is not reader friendly. If you will fix the formatting, then I will be back.
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