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• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) WHCnelson 2011-01-08

  Nice story. I like it and would like another chapter... Also, add this story to the www.fanfiction.net site... others should read it as well

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  I have everything posted under the same author name at ff.net as well.

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) tiger982305 2011-01-11

  very good story, enjoy both the plot and the smut. I look forward to your next update.

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) Basilisk1 2011-05-23

  I loved the Fleur chap. The X-over with Lara Croft and Indiana Jones was a nice touch. You'll have to go into more detail exactly what the "ritual" was about eventually though... I don't know if you've thought of it, but, how about eventually adding Tonks??

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) kstchrof2 2013-03-16

  Good "story-chapter" with all the Indiana Jones references! I thought Fleur's "Veela flames" were very cool, as well as her squirting fluids! I wonder if Harry will ever get his wish to get it tested? lol About her accent, I don't see how/why Fleur was leaving off the 't' on 'tomb', though. The French accent typically emphasises the vowel sounds (e.g. "leetle") and skips the beginning of, say, 'Arry'; and sometimes the 'th' sounds are more like 'z'.

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