Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Halloween
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Halloween
(#) Dr-Giggles 2010-11-09
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I love this, so far.
You're probably one of the best writers around this site. I can picture everything you write so perfectly. Quite the skill, you have there.
For my sanity, update soon?
xoAuthor's response
Wow thankoo :D Eh, its a skill that comes with years and years of practice XD
I shall update soon as, so keep a hold of those marbles just a little longer ;D
xoHalloween
(#) i_bleed_neon 2010-11-10
I just found this but I have to say I LOVE it so far. I love all of the mystery and seductiveness and I love your writing style. It makes it easy to imagine the whole scene. Update soon. :)
xo brittAuthor's response
Ahh thankee :D I'm glad you like it x)
xoHalloween
(#) Givin_Em_Hell_x 2010-12-22
Hahaha! "'fuck me' mode." I love the way this story is written. It has some grammatical errors here and there, but I love the narration and the detail you put into it. Good job, not many Frerards can hold my attention nowadays... and I can tell the sex is going to be hot. Onwards! :)Author's response
Yeaah, I always put my work through a spell check but I have started lapsing on the whole proof reading thing which is bad of me xD So there will be stupid mistakes I should clear up... I've noticed I tend to put 'slightly' when I mean to put 'slight'. It's a bad habit xD
But I'm glad that doesn't stop you from enjoying it :D And well, I like my frerards to be a little more spicy than most peoples, so hopefully you'll agree ;D
xo
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