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It's only us, it's only me
23 reviewsFrank was sweating, and that was before Mr Way even turned up to take detention.
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What Happens After Class
(#) Misery_Saver1081 2011-03-03
Your so welcome! You should definitly make it longer :3 my perveted Ferard mind fucking loves it :D So yesh, longer and some plot twists, 'cause this story is awesomeAuthor's response
No problem :3 Yeah, thanks, Nobody else has really said if they wanted it to go further but I really wanna do it. Sorry progress is slow but shits going down at home at the moment. Glad you enjoy! :D ~ M xoWhat Happens After Class
(#) Misery_Saver1081 2011-03-03
Your so welcome! Sweet, definitly make it longer :D my perverted Ferard mind fucking loves it! And plot twists, eh? Fah-king-sah-weet!Author's response
muhehe glad you approve. wrapping up chapter 2 as we speak :3What Happens After Class
(#) Misery_Saver1081 2011-03-03
Oops, reviewed it twice... about the same thing... sowwiez :cWhat Happens After Class
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-03-29
Rape is NOT hot and anyone who disagrees can go drown in their own peverted sickness. I'm only bothering with this garbage to drill that into some of your heads. It's not Frerard, it's paedophilia. And it's disgusting.
Jeez, it's not even well-written!Author's response
Thanks for the response, i'm also pretty sure that Frank is over 16 in this. Sorry if this offends you, don't bother reading if it does.
There's far much worse out there, much worse. I know rape is not to be taken lightly, perhps I should put up the rating to NYC - 17 if you think it's that bad?
Also I can't help but notice you have no stories up yourself and are a self confessed flamer that 'out to help others' with it?
Lets see what you have written then, so I can improve my atrocious english skills or at least tell me how to improvew withotu shoving your opinions down my throat :/
What Happens After Class
(#) midnightdreamer 2011-04-04
dear Kid_Vicous
if u are gonna be such a pissy bitch about it dont fucking read it
jst fuck off and actually write some shit then u can tell us whats good
hope u get raped up the ass with a pneumatic drill
wait thts too good for you jst go die i a hole
yours sincerly
sick and fucking luvin it
Author's response
o.o Wow... um... Thanks. I agree with the 'actaull ywrite shit' part.
I admmire your passion, dreamer :3
Also, glad you like it ^ ^What Happens After Class
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-06
Thanks for your very mature response. I haven't had rape threats in a while, it was refreshing. Yep, I'm a flamer and proud of it. Although I take your point about writing something. I'll give it a go, although you'll probably flame it just for the fact that I wrote it. Oh well. Life sucks.Author's response
I don't recall ever threatening to rape anyone, that is just out of hand and immature.
No I am genuinely interested in what you would write, I would only give honest feedback.
Flaming is your job, apparently. If I don't like something I don't tend to review it or don't loose my shit over it if I'm offended.What Happens After Class
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-06
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There is a fine line between flaming in order to 'improve everones writing for the sake of us all' and trolling.What Happens After Class
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-04-06
no offense but i kinda agree with Vicous. this is a teensy bit wrong. and also, i dont think u shud bite his/her head off for writing wat they think. i mean, their opinion and so on and so forth. :/
altho i wish ud write somthing as well. itd b interestingAuthor's response
I wasn't biting anyone's head off, sorry if it came off that way and sorry if you don't like the content of my story but that's what the warnings are for.
I know the content isn't what most people will agree with but this is just one of the stories I'm writing.
I respect everones opinion as I hope mine to be and if you don't agree with the content that's fine but I won't stop writing.What Happens After Class
(#) midnightdreamer 2011-04-06
oh wait i dontgive a fucking shit go on write something then lets see how well it goes down
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