(#) longreachjones 2010-12-03Awesome concept, fantastic finisher... WAY TOO SHORT!
Although I am also a fan of letting the reader's imagination do some of the work, this could easily stand to be doubled or even trebled in size.
Author's responseThanks for the review!
I agree that it could have been longer, but I'm not very good at writing smut. I may end up writing some more in this area to explain what Harry is doing and why, but only if an idea strikes me as I want to work on my other story.
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