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(#) longreachjones 2010-12-03
Awesome concept, fantastic finisher... WAY TOO SHORT!
Although I am also a fan of letting the reader's imagination do some of the work, this could easily stand to be doubled or even trebled in size.Author's response
Thanks for the review!
I agree that it could have been longer, but I'm not very good at writing smut. I may end up writing some more in this area to explain what Harry is doing and why, but only if an idea strikes me as I want to work on my other story.Oops!
(#) Wonderbee31 2010-12-03
Heh, that was a neat little bit of role play with Harry and Hermione there, great little ficlet.Author's response
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Who knew Hermione might like tentacle bondage? LOL
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