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• The Mistake:Revised

  (#) Cateagle 2010-12-09

  It's going to be rather interesting to see who the representative is an d what their reaction to Harry being the team leader is. Methinks this is going to get way more complicated than anyone expects.

• The Mistake:Revised

  (#) lycus 2010-12-13

  Wow! I couldn't update fast enough since you double updated, But I'll give it a try. Now to Harry it seems like Hermione is cold but most likely she is in a depression and has most likely thrown herself into her work especally since she really realises what she has done, And I doubt that she has maintained a relationship with the weasleys since it was them that encouraged Hermiones fears. And Harrys relationship with his team mate seeme more like a rebound relationship. But I can't wait to see the reactions when Harry returns.

  Author's response

  Yeah, I had an idea that just attacked me and wouldn't let go. I'm just a perfectionist and don't like letting my chapters publish till I've edited to death.
  
  If you remember Hermione only came out to the public when she was friends with Harry, same with Ron. The Weasleys in their quest for attention threw Harry by the wayside, how would you feel if someone this close to you did that? However, Hermione is a different story.But you'll have to keep reading to see what happens.
  
  Thanks for reviewing and reading! Happy Holidays!

• The Mistake:Revised

  (#) jabarber69 2010-12-16

  hey just read everything up to this chapter, so far its an interesting story, and I cant wait to see their reactions when harry shows up....so what going to happen is he and mione going to get back together....guess well just have to wait and see....the writing is well done also, though I would add that in before I forgot it.

• The Mistake:Revised

  (#) Wonderbee31 2010-12-18

  Very interesting part here, and enjoyed how the stroy is coming along, though will wonder what might happen with Harry and crew when they arrive, and if Hermione and the others will overdo it trying to to get him to accept them again?

• The Mistake:Revised

  (#) anakhuskerfan 2010-12-25

  Interesting story so far, Im looking forward to seeing Harry's return to England and how he acts with his crew.

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