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• Insecure

  (#) ICBB 2010-05-11

  you did it again man. The start is amazing. I feel like this is going to become an epic, original and unique story.
  
  Update soon!

• Insecure

  (#) Shwing999 2010-05-11

  I really enjoyed it, but would it be possible to give us a better authors note before the next chapter? I know its AU, but there are so many different types out there. Perhaps tell us if its at a different time then cannon, ages, and what may have happened at Hogwarts so the Triwizard Tournament didn't happen? If you planned on filling us in later, my bad As much as i enjoy the premise, the style its written in, and your overall skill as a writer, i just rather not feel confused. We who read here have such clear pictures of what roles a character can play, and the relationships between them, or should be between them, that i think i would enjoy knowing just how different the world you're introducing is from cannon.

  Author's response

  Hey yeah sorry about that. I was planning to answer most questions as the story unfolds. However, I do see where you are coming from.
  
  I can't promise anything solid right now, but thank you for reviewing and bringing this up.

• Insecure

  (#) Cateagle 2010-05-11

  An attention-grabbing start and I'm looking forward to seeing more. This is clearly an AU where they did not compete against each other in the TWT (or she'd recognize him) nor where Sirius went through the veil (since he's apparently still around to help found that agency), but that's about all that can be determined so far. It most definitely sounds like a most unique (those are always appreciated) story and I'm looking forward to the twists and turns this oen takes.

• Insecure

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2010-05-11

  I'm definitely intrigued. Not a lot of AU stories like this one!

• Insecure

  (#) Theo 2010-05-11

  Sounds interesting, I just wish you would finish your other stories first.

• Insecure

  (#) chrisguy9017 2010-05-12

  It was ok the writing wasn't horrible but could use some work, and the name of the security agency could have used some more imagination.

  Author's response

  I changed the agency's name. I've always wanted to change it, but didn't have time to edit the story for a bit.
  
  I hope you like the new name better.

• Insecure

  (#) Cateagle 2010-05-12

  Now that sounds like an Angecy name that Sirius would come up with. Mind you, Fleur's ass sounds like it'd be a right pleasure to watch. . This sounds like a fun time for all.

• Insecure

  (#) adamovita 2010-05-14

  Excellent story and very original, I can't wait to read more.

• Insecure

  (#) ICBB 2010-05-14

  LOL!!! BLACK ASS WATCHERS!?! Potter likes watching black budunkcadunks

• Insecure

  (#) cah11 2010-05-16

  Definatly a unique way to introduce Harry, and also a good start to the story. Update soon.

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