(#) alligatorpie 2010-12-26I love it! It's really well done. I just want to point out one thing.
I was really confused at the beginning, since Frank calls Billie 'Bill'. The first time he called her 'Billie' my mind immediately jumped to Billie Joe Armstrong. But then I was confused about why Frank would want to pretend to sleep with a guy to impress a girl. Maybe I'm just weird for being confused, but the way Frank asked if everything was working with Cassie, I thought maybe Cassie and Billie were together. It wasn't until the note from Cassie where she talks about moving forward with Ryland, and says Billie Jean that I understood the situation. Maybe talking about Cassie and Ryland as a couple in that first conversation with Frank, or mentioning that they're roommates or something would clear that up, and maybe Frank could call Billie 'Billie Jean' some time in that first conversation. Just a thought. :)
ANYWAY, please update soon! I really wanna know what's going to happen next.
Author's responseSorry, I just realized that. Billie is a girl to clear that up. Her name is Billie Beatrix. Billie Jean is just a nickname from her room mate Cassie. I'll edit it right now to fix it. I didn't want to give too much away, but I guess I'll have to.
Thanks for the review.
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