(#) i_bleed_neon 2011-01-02I really liked this chapter. This may just be me but it seems almost like Gerard vented his frustrations out on the canvas and in a way that's how he sees/feels about Frank. Like he's beautiful, charming, witty, etc. on the outside but inside he's ugly/insecure. That's just my opinion though. Either way it was amazing. I think Gerard gets so annoyed with Frank simply because Frank oozes self-confidence and charm where as Gerard lacks that in himself but wishes he could be like that. Update soon. :)
(#) ShotGunSinner 2011-01-03What the two above said ^
It's amazing, I love this so much!
You are incredible my dear you truly truly are! I just can't get enough of this story, it gets better and better. Your writing as improved a lot, which is fantastic, and you have grasped the concepts of your characters even more. The angst is so strong and you describe human emotion very well, I love this and I wish you got more reviews for this. Isss so not fair!
(#) ShotGunSinner 2011-01-03Fuck! I just realised this was the last chapter! Gasps and twitches on the ground
I have this on alert so I shall know when a new chapter comes up and I shall wait as paitently as possible.
Update soon but ya know, when your comfortable and suchness. I'll give you cookiiieeeesss?! I askith for more Mikey if you can,and honestly, more Frikey. Tis so cute ^^
Love this =D
(#) whoah-that 2011-01-03Whoah. Just read that all in one sitting. Pretty awesome stuff you've got here. I love when a story has something that's ACTUALLY unique, with an interesting storyline and not just "HEY, YOU'RE HOT, LET'S BANG." As you can tell, I enjoy this. I actually found myself gritting my teeth on this chapter. Ha. Anyway, I'll be waiting for another update. On with it, then. OverAndOutxx
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