Paradise, truncated. Despite himself, Spike believes in happy endings. Sort of.
I enjoyed the imagery. thats hot.
The writing sounded in character - the way Spike would talk. I liked it.
Yeah I think that would be how Spike would see it. I mean it is so him. He would like a lazy peaceful day with a smoker of a girl next to him. Loved it. It was on to make you think.
Haha! Leave it Spike to have a paradise made entirely of cigarettes. I had to smile.
This felt very Spike, and the writing was smooth. Very enjoyable read; thank you
Spike is very hard character to write for I think. You did very well. Short, sweet, and to the point.
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