(#) shortygirl 2011-01-06*rasises hand..i emailed you...
Im so glad your writing again...i love your writing..
as for ideas well in photograph it seems like it takes Gerard forever to find out whats really happening to her..i think he would noticed sooner
as for the Ripper i love it the way it is. i don't think anything is wrong
(#) smashingdreamsxx 2011-01-08Ripper is possibly the best story i have read on here! and i don't think u should change it what so ever and u should continue it asap! i dont think ur writing got sloppy at all and it sounds like it was about to get really interesting. ur an amazing writer, im so drawen in, please dont keep me hanging lol.
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