Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Hold your breath, kid!
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Hold your breath, kid!
(#) AstroSkull 2011-01-16
YAY, Frankie feels the same way! :DD
Cant wait for another update :) xxAuthor's response
hahaha awww that was a quick review :) thank you soo much, i know it was abit cheesy but i kinda write this ages ago so i think my writing has got better.
and i sure will :D xxHold your breath, kid!
(#) ThatCrazyKid 2011-01-16
This is great, can't wait for the next update... Which I hope will be soon? ;DD xAuthor's response
awww thank you soo much, it really means alot and yes more will be on it's way ;)Hold your breath, kid!
(#) HiMyNameIs 2011-01-16
That was amazing :)
MOREAuthor's response
really? :0 i thought it was cheesy lol i'm gald you like it thanks soo much ^^ more will be coming :)Hold your breath, kid!
(#) CosmicZombie 2011-03-06
oh my god that was just SOOO cute!! loved this haha ---> “I’m looking for the snooze button,” this chapter was just utterly adorable and i'm so happy Frankie feels the same for Gerard :D really liked the way you got them to kiss too :)
just realized i reviewed the last two chapters ages ago...but i didnt notice when i reviewed them just now! god i'm such and idiot lol xD
anyways, i'm off to read more now :D
CosmicZombie xo
p.s. thank you soo much for the awesome review on "you'll never fit in much, kid" it made me smile like a freaky teenage frerard loving fan girl. which i am lol xD
god, i really need to shorten my reviews haha!Author's response
haha awwww thank you :)
i'm soo glad you like it i realllly am
hehe thanks, i wasn't sure about this chapter but i'm glad you ike it :D
you just made me gigggle like a little over loving mcr fan girl i am lol
haha lol yep i only noticed that the second time you reviewd lol
haha its nice you liike it anyway :)
p.s. stop saying that XD i love your reviews they are the ones that make me want to write more and man i'm the same i just write to much lol
my reviews are just as long lol
who doesn't love long reviews? haha
xx coz
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