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• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) microwavedhamster202 2011-02-08

  Is everybody updating with a depressing chapter today? D:
  
  Haha seriously though, I love the story. Update soon! :)

  Author's response

  Aww sorry XD it will get nicer i promise :)
  
  Thank youuu soo much, i am soo happy you like it really it does mean alot xx cfob

• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) AstroSkull 2011-02-08

  This.was.just.WOAH.
  I was literally at the edge of my seat during the surgery part, and I have to say, what Gerard was feeling throughout everything was described really well :)
  And dude, this chapter was LONGGG! :DD
  That made me really happy xD
  Also Frankie needs to come out of that coma, GERARD NEEDS YOU FRANKIE! D:
  Will be waiting for more :)
  xx

  Author's response

  Aww thank youu soo much i aim to pweaseee hehe XD woah really? Awww Λ_Λ awesome i'm in maths now and it doesnt seem so bad now :) hehe thank uuuu again
  I know poor ge maybe i will let frankie live XD
  Love yaa xx cfob

• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) sheXxie 2011-02-08

  I had that same lump in my throat the whole time reading that! It's really sad, but I have hope for poor Frankie and Gerard.

  Author's response

  wow really? Awww thats amazing so i'm gussing thats a complement ? Lol
  
  Thanks for reviewing anyway it really does make ne feel sooooooo happy if i havn't already made it obviouse XD
  Xx cfob

• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) Kill_the_mainstream 2011-02-09

  GAAAAAH!!! FWANKIE!!! You can't! You can't kill off little Frankie! Gee would be so sad ='(
  
  Okay, my traumatic freak-out aside, it is very well written. You can really feel the internal turmoil that Gerard is feeling as he hopes for the one he loves to wake up. Keep up the good work!

  Author's response

  Awww woaw thanks :) aww dont think i can put gee through too much can i? :)
  Hehe well i try it's my first frerard so i am just really amazed its doing so well and that you all love it
  There is nothing i can really say but thnk you...so thank you soo much xx cfob

• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) bloodless_souls 2011-02-09

  is ray visiting frankie too? now they are friends and all. lol just how my mind works xD and frank better wake up!! coz frank cant just leave gee hanging like that :/ update soon please :D

  Author's response

  Ohhhhh fuck, i am soo stupid i havn't even put Ray seeing Frankie uggh damn.
  
  However, there is more of Ray later on and more Mikey too :)
  hehe i just forgot :/ damn
  anyway yes the next one will be up tomoz :) thanks for reviewing
  xx cfob

• Hold your breath, kid!

  (#) CosmicZombie 2011-03-07

  FRANK BETTER WAKE UP!!! sorry, just had to say that xD amazing update, you really captured how Gee and everyone was feeling in that situation...i felt so sorry for him! i would give you a longer review, but i really need to go find out what happens now lol, or i'll die of the suspense!!
  steals super speed airplane to get to the next chapter as fast as possible
  

  Author's response

  haha awwww thanks it really means a lot, no matter how much i say it, it really does XD hehe
  your just awesomeastic = awesome and fantastic in one >.<
  haha awww no probs its just really nice you reviewd :)
  xx coz

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