Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Keep On Licking Scars
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Keep On Licking Scars
(#) TeamFrerard 2011-02-14
:O
i really love this, please update soon, this sounds such a great fanfic, really looking forward to reading more!
Great job!Keep On Licking Scars
(#) PartyPoison 2011-02-14
I like this a lot, it's really good!
Please update soon!! I can't wait for more!Keep On Licking Scars
(#) harleyanne 2011-02-14
This is absolutely brilliant, seriously great writing.
You clearly know how to structure and write a story, not just a fanfic, and for that reason I can't wait to keep up with this and see where you take it. I'm really really interested - great work.Keep On Licking Scars
(#) sheXxie 2011-02-15
Wow, really good! You're a great writer, and I love this story so far. Really original and interesting ideas. Please update soon!Keep On Licking Scars
(#) broken_wings 2011-02-17
Very...raw. And visceral. It left me feeling so strange, sparked something in me. That's what good writing should do-make you feel something, even if you aren't sure what is or how you feel about it, lol. Very very powerful stuff you've written, especially about skin picking. One suggestion to keep in mind: more showing, less telling. Your most powerful points in the story are the beginning and when you show us Frank picking his skin. You don't just say that he's a skin picker or that he might be gay- you showed us through his actions. Scenes stick with readers. Lots of commentary on those scenes bogs down the flow.
But like I said, this is very powerful. It's added to my favorites and I'll be waiting for an update!!Keep On Licking Scars
(#) CosmicZombie 2011-02-24
hey, this is awesome!! xD really like the way you write- it's very emotive and descriptive :) i wanna know what happens too... keep it up! :P
CosmicZombie xo
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