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Valentine's Day Special
2 reviewsKnuckles does some reflecting on V-day about a certain white bat. One-shot.
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Valentine's Day Special
(#) Chase_the_Cat 2006-05-18
Um... not bad. ^_^ It helps that I'm KnuxRouge, and it was cute, but... it wasn't as well-written as I might've hoped. Knuckles' train of thought seemed to wander a lot, and the grammar left a little something to be desired... but it was sweet. Very sweet.Valentine's Day Special
(#) JesusKetchum31 2006-05-18
This is cute, but, as Knuckles himself put it, kind of out of character. I also think you broke the fourth wall a bit too much. It's okay to skirt it a bit, but when you have a character say that the story is out of character, you're pushing it. Also, Knuckles' narration seemed a little... stiff. Still, there's potential here. It was adorable, and kinda funny.
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