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Fragmented
3 reviews'They are parts of a circle.' Yoruichi, Urahara, Kaien, Kuukaku and Byakuya are friends. Even though they might not see each other much any more.
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Fragmented
(#) Kamaitachi 2007-03-11
Wow, this story is wonderful! I'm not sure what else to say about it...There's so much emotion in this story; I chuckled, smiled, sighed, frowned, and was over all moved by your great story. Excellent conveyance of the feelings and emotions of the characters.
A couple grammatical errors here and there, but not too noticeable unless you're rather nitpicky like me, and I'm sure there are errors in my review, so I can't nag too much about the mistakes. :)
A well-written and thought-provoking story. Good job!Fragmented
(#) Lilac_Ravine 2008-10-30
Awesome way of weaving in the missing pieces from the heirs of the "Four Great Noble Houses". Great insight to include Kaien and Kuukaku. Also the lack of a convenient ending, nice touch!
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