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Harry Potter Payback Time
(#) turlyon 2011-03-06
lots of improvement in grammar and structure when compared to the first chapter good job and keep up the hard work.Author's response
thanks if you have any suggestions then let me know I plan to polish this story up until it is how I want it to be and thank you for the review
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