(#) iFreak_YouOut 2011-03-25So, I ahem WAS chewing gum, but you know, after awhile it didn't seem so appetizing anymore...
I swear you had better not kill Gerard.
That was horrible. I mean your writing was execptional, but the things that keep happening to Gee are horrible.
I hope Frank really fucks James up.
NEXT UPDATE SOON!
(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-03-25Yay! Finally! I loved how angry Mikey got at James and the suckerpunch James recieved. I'm so glad that this bit with Gerard being these old men's whore is over, but I can tell the fiction itself is far from over unless James goes to jail.
Keep updatin'! I gotta see what happens!
(#) imdisenchanted 2011-03-26Holy fuck, this story is so powerful. I felt like I was going to cry like the whole way through, it's so vivid and real D: I have to say though, I want to slaughter James and all those other men abusing Gerard D: then let them die slowly and painfully. Fuuuck, you have to update soon, D:
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