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That Man is Lethal
4 reviewsSo who is at the window?? well your about to find out :D thanks for all the R&RS so far please carry on xx coz
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Hold your breath, kid!
(#) xxKilljoysxx 2011-03-26
:O Please keep writing!!! it makes me sad when there is no more to read of this story!Author's response
awwww thanks for the review and yes i will don't worry :D
i wouldn't be that cruel and leave it with a big cliffhanger like that lol
xx cozHold your breath, kid!
(#) annabel-lee 2011-03-26
Please tell me Gerard shot Steve! Your so evil! With the cliff hangers! I love this story. It's great!Author's response
hmmm could i be that mean ?? well you will soo find out in the next chapter haha :)
lol
yeah i know i love cliffhangers haha and thanks thats really really great you think that :) it's good to have your support and defo for my first and not so briliantly done story
xx cozHold your breath, kid!
(#) bloodless_souls 2011-03-26
OH HELL NO DID HE JUST SHOT GEE??? GETS SHOTGUN o.e I hope ray came outta no where with a freakin' rifle.Author's response
haha lol i just love your reactions hehe XD awwwww
and well you will soon know what happens :D
thanks so much for your support and reviews
xx cozHold your breath, kid!
(#) CosmicZombie 2011-03-29
Steve better not have killed Gee!! gets out raygun if he has...HE WILL DIE!! lol sorry...got a bit carried away being killjoyish xD really really great chapter...scary, but awesome!! please update soon...i just HAVE to find out what happens :O
CosmicZombie xo
p.s. i know this is another scarily short review for me, but my evil dad is kicking me off the computer :( hope i'll be able to get on later!Author's response
haha umm well you will just have to find out XD
hehe lol its okay haha lol somtimes i do that like keep your boots tight and your gun close, and die with your mask on if you have to lol something like that and i dont even like the killjoy stuff really
maybe a lil
anyway thankks for reviewing yeah lol its scarily short haha but thank you soo much for read and reviewing anyway :D
oh i will i should post it on thursday or friday :)
awww lol me too
xx coz
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