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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) BenRG 2006-05-21
Well, that is an interesting concept, to say the least. I would probably have used the name 'Michael'. However, that has far too many religious connotations and probably would have earned you a few flames so, on the whole, I think you made the right choice.
So, we have a mystery being, apparently the last survivor of his universe (shades of Galactus in the Marvel comics universe). He has been trained by The Big One to save the universe and protect its native protectors. Not an entirely original concept but you still deserve a lot of credit for making work here.
Willow's little klutz attack at the end made me smile. It is really in character and I could see it happen in my head.
What's the bet that Adam wanted the Scoobies to follow him? I have no doubt that if he wanted to be undisturbed, they would have had no chance of finding his trail.
BenRG's Rating: 8/10The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Shaggy37 2006-05-21
very nice start so far, I just joined your yahoo group so I can't wait:):)The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) foxychibi 2006-05-30
This story is very interesting. It is certainly different...But I have a question. I am new to this site, and I wondered why you placed this story in the Harry Potter section, when you have made know indecation that the story is going to end up there, apart from the magic of course.
Is the Guardian going to bring Buffy and the others into the Harry Potter world and make them fight in the war? or is the Guardian Harry Potter himself, but was able to change his appearance at will?
I like the story and how you have structured it. Very interesting.
Keep up the good work, and I will wait patiently for the next chapter.
FoxychibiThe Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) paulblay 2009-06-26
The longwinded explanationy stuff in this and the following chapter don't catch my interest at all.
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