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Chapter One
4 reviews16 years ago the Potters' faked their sons death, hiding him at an orphanage in France to save him from the prophecy. But when the effects of a thirty year war prove too much for the world, the sea...
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The Lost Fate
(#) Dark_Mage 2006-05-22
I was abit creeped by the use of drugs. I hate it when Harry becomes an addict of some sort. Anyway the chapter was well written but I just hope that he isn't a complete jerk, isn't a womaniser like guy and cuts back on the drugs. You could still make him really rebelious without them
Good writing though
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(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-06-12
Ah, I always thought it was spelled Louis. It doesn't matter.
Anyway, good story. I like the initial parallel between Harry and Voldemort, although I like the deviation even more. Looking forward to seeing what you do with this fic.
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