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• Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

  (#) rb8 2011-04-12

  I'm liking the story so far, despite being unfamiliar with the crossover material (can you provide a title/author?). Personally, I prefer longer chapters, but short chapters won't push me away (unless the update rate becomes REALLY slow).

  Author's response

  Overlord is actually a game for the PS3, not a book. Basically you play as the bad guy, and subdue the forces of good to establish your Dark Domain. It's a very exhilarating and welcome change from always being the good guy.

• Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

  (#) DrummerBoy4Life 2011-05-06

  This story is good so far. The chapter length is okay and the character and plot devolpment has been done well.
  It is also nice to see a different idea coming forward, many people would not think of cross over like this.
  
  It will be interesting to see how you develop Harry into an Overlord.
  
  I must ask though...
  Who will be Harry's mistress?
  
  And if you still need a Beta then I would be more than willing to help as I do have knowladge of writing a Dark Harry from reading other stories. I am also fairly familiar with the plot of Overlord.
  
  I hope you enjoy writing this fic, as much as I enjoyed reading it.
  ---DB4l

  Author's response

  As far as I have things planned, the Mistresses will be Luna Lovegood, Fleur Delacour,and that Hermione Granger. I already have a beta, though I appreciate the offer, and you can rest knowing that Harry's evil transformation will take quite some time. He will become Evil by the end, though.

• Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

  (#) GrantLarceny 2011-05-13

  lol i thought the first sentence said 'hermione granger had always been an earley wanker'

• Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

  (#) twistyguru 2011-06-05

  OMG, I just made the connection to the Video Game 'OVERLORD'!
  foflmao!
  I love that game, especially when the minions run back with loot screaming 'For You...!'.
  Oh, this could be fun, indeed.
  I have this vision of Voldie and the DEs getting overrun by minions while Harry watches and laughs....

• Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

  (#) Lydia_Hood 2011-09-27

  Interesting story, I mean that Harry don't snap and turn into what I would call a "lesser" Evil is something which is just too surprising most of the time. I mean I am not THAT bad in life but if I went thru only a fraction of what Harry does I would snap, anyhow good story, keep on writing!

• Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

  (#) bluezy 2011-10-05

  Triple chapter length would be nice. Go back and read canon, the average chapter length is about 10 k words.

• Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

  (#) dreadme 2012-02-20

  pretty good story so far keep up the interesting story

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