Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > tears fall for a reason
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tears fall for a reason
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-04-19
you should put some actual dialog in this. that would make it so much better :)Author's response
thanks and i will put more diaolgue in it .tears fall for a reason
(#) ChloesGreenDay 2011-05-01
Okay, so we're finally seeing a few full stops here, but there are still to many errors to name. It's alright to make two or three, but there's loads in this. Don't think i'm being nasty, i'm just trying to help.Author's response
its ok thank you
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