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Surprise!
14 reviewsJay and Theresa have been getting really close so when it's her birthday Jay and the others plan a surprise party. She's gotten a big surprise that causes her to get in more trouble than she's bar...
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Surprise!
(#) Pheonee 2006-06-11
Jay is never gonna speak to you again!! Nor will I until you update AND bring her back to life. So don't expect any more praise until Theresa is alive again--Just constructive critism!! (although I still really loved it)
The only thing wrong with this is that I reckon Jay would have run around screaming at the top of his lungs when Thereasa died. So, maybe a little more detail in that particular section? Nothing else is amiss.
This is the last word of encouragement you'll hear until you bring her back to life!! So you'd better enjoy it.
I LOVED YOUR STORY!!!! KEEP WRITING OR I WILL...um...i wi--hey!! caps lock isn't on anymo--I WILL COME AND--AND--AND--do something really painful. So keep writing. evil glareSurprise!
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-07-21
Very good chapter, loved it! Could the book be 'the lightning theif' (sorry if the title spelt wrong). Please update soon, if I am write e-mail me at spjonz@hotmail.comSurprise!
(#) ClassoftheTitans_fan 2006-09-17
Oh i love it! I can't wait to know what happens next! update soon!!Surprise!
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-10-07
Oh yeah, please dont stop writing. Your are truly talented and I want to see this story finished.
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