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Helping Out

The gang goes on a jog and Jay helps Theresa back home.

Category: Class of the Titans - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006-05-22 - Updated: 2006-05-23 - 696 words

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Surprise!

(#) Arisey 2006-05-23

It's okay, but just a tip: you should put a space after someone has talked. Bad: Atlanta said (blah blah blah)
Then Theresa said(blah)

Good: Atlanta said (blah)

Then Theresa replied (blah)
Surprise!

(#) dancechickie222 2006-10-06

this is awsum! i have alot of chapters to read though lol!

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Helping Out

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Surprise!

(#) Arisey 2006-05-23

Surprise!

(#) dancechickie222 2006-10-06