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Ancient Manuscripts. Writing from ages 11-21.
(#) helluin 2006-05-23
Eeee. Beautiful and alarming or beautiful and deep, depending on whether you mean that the child was sacrificed or merely given to the land after death. The ambiguity works just fine. There's a few typos. (Pedal --> petal, I think, and meep, I forgot to note the others.)
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