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Our Dangerous Days
(#) StopThePress 2011-04-25
I love the way this starts, by the way! I really like where this story's going. The only thing I would advise you to do is practice separating quotes with the enter key. Every time a character speaks, unless the same character is still speaking, hit the 'Enter' key. (: Other than that, I really like this story!Author's response
Thank you, I will remember to do that on my next chapter. I haven't written Fanfics in a long time I love reading them but I have to have a good idea if I am going to write one.
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