(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-04-24No lie-ins does indeed make Party Pooper a moody killjoy. trust ME.
N'aaaw indeed. that chapter was sweeter than a jammy doughnut. aw, I like Frank now. And gerard. Geez kid, why couldn't you just make one of them a prick? huh? HUH?
Author's responseIf I made one of them a prick that would be STOOPID.
I will. Soon.
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-25This story makes me "'Naaaw" and giggle in a very sad, teenage girl who doesn't get out much sort of way.
One thing. You don't want to make this story go too fast but you don't want it too slow either. You're doing good at the moment but if I were you I'd maybe pick up the pace a little bit.
Author's responseDon't worry, I know exactly what you mean by that and I've decided to make my chapters longer and more eventful now.
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