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• If I crash on the couch, can I sleep in my clothes?

  (#) perfectzombie 2011-04-23

  aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw ^_^ update soon:D

  Author's response

  Thank you, I will update soon, I promise :D

• If I crash on the couch, can I sleep in my clothes?

  (#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-24

  This was well-written and the line spacing is so much easier to read. Well done! Now go back and change the rest of your chapters to follow the same way.
  
  This chapter was good, I liked the interplay between Gerard and Frank. Make sure you don't take things too quickly with them, it's always very unrealistic when they've just met one day and the next moment they're making out. Also you're kind of doing the whole listing thing again. Becareful with that, try and make it read more smoothly. But you're getting the whole awkward shy gay thing across very nicely, I like that.
  
  All in all, very nice work. Good chapter!

  Author's response

  Thank you. Let me first say you are amazing. Most people would hate someone correcting them all the time but for me it helps. I will be updating the other chapters when I next update which should be up later today. Please keep on reviewing because your review really help me. :)

• If I crash on the couch, can I sleep in my clothes?

  (#) fueledbyPanic 2011-04-24

  That was adorable! I really enjoy the whole oh he's probably not gay just get over it thing. And yeah I agree with Kid_Vicous take it slowly.

  Author's response

  Thank you, I am thinking about possible twists and dangers they will face, if you understand what I mean. I would really apreciate it if you gave me your thoughts on what you think could happen next. :)

• If I crash on the couch, can I sleep in my clothes?

  (#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-25

  Thanks. It's really nice to know someone out there doesn't want me dead.

  Author's response

  Hehe :)

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