(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-25"Without you there be no reason for me to keep on living". There should be a "would" in there somewhere. Oh, and this was an accident but it made me laugh. "You make feel important. You make feel loved." Because the "me" is missing from both those sentences it kind of makes Frank sound like someone acting a foreigner of some kind of racist sitcom. Sorry, I just found it quite funny.
That aside, good writing again. I guess I like how nice Frank is. I like it when stories have morally righteous main characters who also have gay shower sex.
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