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If I crash on the couch, can I sleep in my clothes?
(#) longstocking 2011-04-24
Right. I stayed up for this, so imma review it first. I feel really sorry for Frank! D: I mean.../His mum!/ I could cry right now. I really could
:D Anyways....GeeGee...havent heard that before...Its cute! xDAuthor's response
Aww, you stayed up so you could read it. Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it :)If I crash on the couch, can I sleep in my clothes?
(#) angelic_chaos 2011-04-25
The first part in Frank's POV was so sad. I feel sorry for him.
And 'GeeGee' and 'Mikey Mouse' Haha funny and cute xD
can't wait until you update the next chapter!
It doesn't matter when you add new characters, just take your time and put them in when you think you should :)Author's response
Things get better for Frankie, and as for Gerard and Mikey... Well they stay pretty much the same coffee adicts the whole way through ;)
I am gald you liked it :)If I crash on the couch, can I sleep in my clothes?
(#) rainbow_apocalypse 2011-04-25
Aww geegee and mikey mouse how cute. You should give frankie a cute nickname like frankiebear okay that just a bit shit lol. But Frankie pov was so sad :( poor him xAuthor's response
Hehe, The Mikey Mouse wasn't mine. I know for a fact it has been used somewhere else so I take no credit for it :) I just thought it would be funny to put it into the story. I am tryna think up ones for Frankie but I am drawing up blanks :/
Thank you for reviewing :) xIf I crash on the couch, can I sleep in my clothes?
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-25
WOW. I didn't spot ANY mistakes. Either you're getting better or I'm losing my touch. I seriously hope it's not the latter.
Drunk mom. Original. But at least she's not abusive because I've seen that so many times on this site. Try to steer away from that cliché and toward an original plotline although trust me, I know how tempting it is to just let Frank get beaten up by his parents and go running off to Gerard. Been there. Done that.
This is coming on really nicely though. Look, I've added it to my subscriptions so I can watch it get better and better! How lovely am I? (Don't answer that.)Author's response
Hehe, Yay I have no mistakes. Are you sure your not losing your touch?
And Frank isnt gonna run off to Gerard. What Frank said, he meant.
Thank you for adding this to your subscriptions :D
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