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An Amazon at Hogwarts
2 reviewsCross over with Ranma1/2, What happen to the Headmaster plains when the Amazons and Ranma Saotome get evolved. Let's just say the school will never be the same again Shampoo/Ranma pairing Female ha...
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An Amazon at Hogwarts
(#) balthazar 2011-05-03
The illiteracy in just the story summary makes this not worth reading. Get a beta and at least pretend you care about what your story looks like before you start posting garbage.An Amazon at Hogwarts
(#) lilgenious 2011-05-10
I agree with balthazar on this story. This story is pure illiterate and you should know more about the characters before you post garbage like this.
My guess would be that this is your first story right? You should get a beta so that you can make a little sense. Also on that note you should also care about what your stories look like before you post them up onto a site such as ficwad or fanfiction.net, maybe also make sure that it makes sense before you post it or even hand anything into a teacher.
Seriously though... get a beta because they will help you with getting a character down and to help you with spelling and grammar.
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