(#) shortygirl 2011-05-02I like this story..though I thought there would be more to them being at the haunted house...
Author's responseI wanted to write more, but I didn't know how or what to exactly write.. I also wanted to get this story moving along, since it was Friday night for like seven chapters.. :P
(#) DeathCookie 2011-05-02For a "filler" chapter I thought this was damn better that just good, it was great. I loved it, because, for one, it really shows how the gang supports Jamie. I have a feeling Bree's gonna confront Jamie about why her and Frank seem to be so secrative, but not yet, because they have pretty much just met. That little bit at the end with Donna made me smile! :D I think your writting style is very unique, because it has personality, and that means a lot.
And R.I.P. Lauren Amber Monforte; I don't know you,but I'm sure those who did miss you terribly, and cherish the memories they have of the time they spent with you. :)
Author's responseAwh, thanks! I'm thinking you might have like psychic abilities about future chapters.. Unique with personality..sweet, it means a lot. Just thanks, once again :)
(#) MikeyWayIsAdorkable 2011-05-02Do I like your writing style? Yes, of course! (And I'm not just saying that because you're my best friend) I can't wait to see what's inside your mind for the next chapters. I'm really looking forward to see how everyone is like and stuff.
RIP Ms. Monforte. I miss her terribly :'( She's in a much better place now, just remember that!
(#) KnivesAndPens 2011-05-04[I relies I haven't reviewed since the first chapter and I apologise.]
I love this story, every time you update it makes my day. Your writing style is different, which is a good thing; I wouldn't want you to change it.
Looking forward to the next chapter ^^
Sign up to review this story.