You find out a bit more about why Bob is there...kinda. And you meet some of the others that are captured.
loved it:) your a really good writer! i love the killjoy names. so um, whoever created those killjoys, KUDOS [sp?] FOR COOLNESS!
And those are 2 killjoys I made up. Glad you like them, i actually base them on characters from an original story of my own. The next chapter will have others in. Most are the "others" Bob reffered to briefly in the 1st chapter. But some are in different groups, am still editing whos here. Next chapter will be up soon as!
They only thing I could "criticize" about is that I usually like my chapters longer other then that keep on truckin'!
This is soo good! I love it(: Please update as soon as you can, I'm sad when I can't read more :L.
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