- Well done on such a good story. It had me thoughtful, happy and laughing in all the right places. Indeed, everyone in my office was wondering what I was snorting with laughter about! (oops :-( )
Anyway, the only significant downer in this story is that Harry is massively OOC. I know that having a significant part of his DNA re-written may have something to do with it, but don't go too crazy, okay?
So, what is the chances that Catgirl!Hermione will make a reappearance to help little Carmen learn to use her special abilities?
This is going to be a haremfic? Well, onto my alerts you go! If it is going to stay this funny, I'm going to enjoy myself!
BenRG's Rating: 7/10
(#) apocalypso 2006-05-26This is great! Well done!
You used an original idea, added great elements to your plot, put in a nicely-sized dose of humor...the works!
Bloody hell, all i can say is well done, this is excellent. I'm really looking forward to your updates.
Good luck writing.
(#) HeWhoComesWithTheDaw 2006-05-26I have been following this story on CaerAzkaban group and I am really glad that you decided to post the story online.
It is truely an entertaining story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I really enjoyed the part where they used the polyjuice potion. I loved it where it was Harry choking Hermione with wings while another Harry was rolling on the floor laughing. That scene was absolutely hilarious!!!
Keep up the good work and update again soon.
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