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With those words, set me free [Frikey one-shot]
17 reviewsWhen Mikey declared his love for Frankie ,Frankie left him abandoned and alone. Is it too late for Frankie to make it up to him now? cute frikey one-shot. If U luv happiness or misery? you will luv...
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With those words, set me free [Frikey one-shot]
(#) CosmicZombie 2011-05-22
shit, that was AMAZING. your writing is so good! I'm not usually particularly keen on frikeys- I'm a frerard girl xD- but that was so so sweet! I actually think (apart from happiness or misery?) that was your best story...it was just the right amount of emotion and description and just...wowness xD I especially loved Mikey's letter to Frank- really beautifully written :)
this is so going in my favourites! I LOVE it! :D
your writing just seems to get better and better...is jealous xD
keep this awesomeness up- I'm gunna go rate this now!
CosmicZombie xo
p.s. i really hope you'll update happiness or misery soon...i totally understand that you have exams though :LAuthor's response
AWWWWW THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH
i was begining to think people had forgotten about me, or this one-shot wasn't any good, so i'm glad you havn't as you are my fave author and write so brilliant :)
yeah i'm a frerard girl and a quinn/bert/jepha girl recently lol
but i thought i would do a frikey, only when mikey has his dark hair he looked so scrumchious then lol dunno y i said that word lol
well this is just a oneshot but thank you soo much
i feel bad that i havn't read your new stuff i just don't seem to read much lately, no excuse really but i will i promise :)
thank you sooo much it means so much to have your opinion and it means even more as your my fave writer
you sooo shouldn't be jelouse your writing is like immaculate. I really don't know how you do it.
oh i will try my very best, i did actually write a but today, i have two and a half pages i will do my best it's just i am soo busy this week it will be hard to find the time.
Still i will try :)
thanks again soo much
chazom
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(#) CosmicZombie 2011-05-22
it's okay :) i really loved this story! awww, am I really your fave author? that means so much, thank you :D
and yeah, Mikey does look yummy with his dark hair...I really like it at the moment too xD
it's fine- I don't expect you to review everything I do, so don't feel you need to! I think the only thing I've done recently is a lighthearted summer frerard fic called "Be My Detonator" anyway.
my writing really isn't immaculate- although it's nice people see it that way! whenever i re-read a piece i've written, i always notice like, a hundred things i want to change about it- i'm such a perfectionist :/ it really annoys me sometimes cause i never feel my work is good enough :L
don't stress about happiness or misery?..take as much time as you want- i'm sure all your readers (and me!) will still be there whenever you update :) it's awesome! it really means a lot you like my work, as you are my fave author on here, and i'm not just saying that xD
god, sorry...i've just been rambling on...hope you don't mind :L
keep on rocking!
CosmicZombie xoAuthor's response
nooo fucking way i am exactly the same lol XD hehe and yeah you are....... i know this sounds a bit wierd but it would be cool if we could meet cuz you sound like a really nice genuin person :)
i wiv him with his dark hair not so much the blonde, i saw this wacked up pic of mcr and mkey and ray looked like chavs, it was a proffeshional one so it wasn't like they were taking the mick it was serious and mikey ahd SILVER nikes on it was just wrong :(
lol yeah i do its just i havn't read anything really been so busy with exams but also been a bit sneaky and played need for speed to much lol
i really wanna read that 'be my detonater' sounds really intruiging, i will get round to it i promise hehe
yeah i am such a perfectionist even thouggh i am the same read through and a dozen things i want to change.
thank you soo much, i'm glad you arn't rushing me into as i am kind of stuck on what to put now hehe
i will find a way don't worry and soon too i have wrote more :D it really means a lot that i'm your fave author, tbh i don't think my work is all that great i aim to achieve more with english of course.
hehe i am doing the exact same thing now...rambling lol
thanks, keep rocking also !!
Chazom
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(#) MidnightWishes 2011-05-23
awwwwww! that was so sweet! your a great author ^^
Author's response
awww thank you soo much your a great reviewer lol :D
thanks
chazom
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(#) Bitch-Bot 2011-05-25
awwwwwwwwww!!
that was so sweet i almost killed my rabbit reading this coz i forgot he was here and he licked me and i shit myself and almost stomped on him
anyway it was great i love your stories youre amazing at writing!!!!Author's response
LOL HAHA thank youuuuu but that isn't really goood lol you should keep your pets alive lol
anywayyyy thank you sooo much thats realy kind of you
hopefull next time ou won't nearly kill your rabbit lol
rabbits are sweet
chazom
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(#) CosmicZombie 2011-05-26
yeah, it really would be cool if we could meet..you seem like a really nice person too :) OMG, i just suddenly had an idea!! you might not want to cause you're already busy with your other stories and exams ect at the moment, but wouldn't it be awesome if we wrote a story together sometime?! like, if it was a frerard, one of us could do Gerard's POV, the other could do Franks! i might be completely crazy suggesting this...but if you'd like to, it'd be awesome!! hope you don't think i'm too much of a freak for suggesting this...:L
please let me know what you think, and sorry about my crazy randomness! :L
CosmicZombie xoAuthor's response
OMG NOOO WAYYYY i thought i sounded freaky for syaing that it would be cool to meet, its just a shame you live in scotland :( but hey i guess you can see simon niel and biffy clyro hehe if you havn't guessed i have a thing for simon thinking of doing a simon and gerard fic lol :)
i think it would be the coolest thing ever, your such an amazing writer and i'm kinda shocked you would want to write a story with me, but thats really sweet :)
i love your randomness btw i'm just like that lol
well all but one of my exams have finished just got maths now, dont think i will be worrying bout that, it's just i have my happiness or misery, i think i should just forgoet my hold your breath i dont like it and i dont want to write something crap as the ending as i know i will as i am not motivated to write that anymore.
Damn i blabber on wayyy more than you lol
yeah it would be sooo awesome, atm i actually am writing something with 'emo-girl' if you know her and soon 'paterick is the sex' tho they live by me so its easier.
writing with you would be awesome but it would be kind of hard to write together y'know. I dunno if we would need msn addys or something.
though i reallly think we should :DWith those words, set me free [Frikey one-shot]
(#) sickly_ill 2011-05-27
One of the most beautiful one-shots anyone could ever write or read. It was the best one-shot I've ever read so far. No joke! I would really like to read more of your writing. And expect me to rate and review a lot of it.
Andrea :)Author's response
awww wow thank you soo much taht really does mean a lot :)
i honsetly didnt think much of this but to hearing you say that is just the sweetest :)
hehe awww thank you and i willl be very thankfull for your R&RS
chazom
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(#) CosmicZombie 2011-05-28
yeah, I wish i didn'tlive in scotland too :/ yeah, i kinda guessed you had a thing for biffy clyro haha! xD i've never actaully checked them out...i'll have to lol
yeah, i guess it would be quite hard, but like i said, you could do one POV and i could do the other...yeah, my email is cosmiczombie@hotmail.co.uk i've never really used msn, but you can use it if you have a hotmail account, can't you? i'm such a retard haha! xD so yeah, if you email me, i'll have your address too, and then we can talk about what we're gunna do the story on :D
this is gunna be awesmome! xD i'm glad you don't think i'm a complete freak for suggesting this haha xD
CosmicZombie xo
p.s. I don't have my own computer, so i'm only allowed on at certain times, so i won't always be able to reply, like, instantly :LAuthor's response
hehe aww i live in birmingham so that isnt to great either lol biffy clyro lives where you are gosh so lucky XD lol hehe
ohh you soo have to their music is soo good and simon is really sweet >.<
ohh yeah we could do that sure i trust that you will write astonishingly so i have no doubts about that, hope i can match up to it though hehe
i'm still very shocked that you would want to write with me :O lol but i'm happy you do :)
lol we can both be retards lol anyway i think you can i'll add you tonight.My names coralie just so you know who has added you.
lol i knowww i'm actually really excited lol if that isnt retarded i dunno what is XD
thats no problem i'll be patient :p
well try
chazom
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(#) CosmicZombie 2011-05-28
haha, my writing really isn't that great, but thank you anyway :D i love your writing and i think you're really talented, so it's gunna be great writing together! xD
okay, cool :) if you can't add me (like i say, although i have hotmail, i don't really use msn, but i think i know how it works...xD) just email me or something :)
i'm really excited too haha!
CosmicZombie xoAuthor's response
awwww no really you truly are there is no denying that :) hehe
i think i am getting better just wish i could become more adept still, anyway just keep working and i'm sure i'll get better, tho both of us :D
yes i am too i will add you now then :)
speakk soon
chazom
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(#) CosmicZombie 2011-05-29
yeah- every time you update something, your writing just seems to get better and better...not that it wasn't awesome already xD
I've accepted you on msn now...but like i say, i haven't got a computer of my own, so i'm only allowed on for a certain amount of time each day...it might be a good idea to arrange some kinda time to be on msn so we can talk about the story?
keep on rocking! xD
CosmicZombie xoAuthor's response
awww thank you soo much :) your too kind hehe i think the same with yours :) hoenstly :D
ohh cool hehe
well i can cuz i have my own laptop so i am on whenever, though i would say it's best to be on at the evening :) so whatever time you are free on the evening is fine :D
speak soon
chazom
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(#) CosmicZombie 2011-05-30
okay, cool...would, like eight-ish be fine? it's just, like i said, my evil parents only let me on for a certain amount of time...grr! can't wait til i can get a laptop of my own haha!
speak soon :)
CosmicZombie xoAuthor's response
yes that will be cool eight it is then or half whenever you find easiets :)
i cannot go on tonight as i have my freind round but tomoz night i will and so forth :D
it will be awesome can't wait to write something hehe
speak tomoz then :) i'll be on whever so its cool!
chazom
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